Late December an Old Man Walks to the Bar
Late December an Old Man Walks to the Bar
it is hard to believe in spring in December with snow falling
all day and collecting against building, trees, and old fences
debts of autumn are hidden: debris of unraked leaves, paper, even
the dog’s house are buried beneath the bitter beauty of snow
it is a time to be lonely, walking to the bar, bundled in layers
of flannel and down with beard, mustache, eyebrows frozen
behind, footprints disappear, ahead, no hint of the future
disturbed by these thoughts a raven shakes snow down
at home the quilt lies folded neatly at the foot of the bed
the flowers have withered and coffee cools in the cup
4 Comments:
there are some things here i don't like - for one it didn't format correctly - it should be couplets with space between - also it seems to need more puncuation -
and it seems a bit contrived - probably should just take it down - but heck, nobody reads here anyway -so for now it will stay - maybe i can salvage it yet.
I read it, but couldn't understand the insertions. I'm seeing [if ! supportEmptyParas][endif] scattered throughout the poem. Help?
that is weird - when i look at it it is fine - but when i tried to link to it on the show original post link on this comments page - it showed up as you said
i don't know -- did any of the other posts look that way?
This is the only one like that down this page. That IS odd.
Sorry I was a bit getting back to you.
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